First time writing high fantasy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DgHL5gSOKE_Ekz5DTvLTD_jhS-LQAjUeKqAvjoiVf4U/edit?usp=sharing (1.1k words)

any critique is welcome. although im primarily looking to ask if the ending hook makes sense and whether the worldbuilding bits weigh the chapter down or not