Thoughts on this shirt?

I like simple streetwear designs that have good color palette, and cool but simple designs. Think early 2000s skate brands. My brand is inspired by my dna being that I’m an Ethiopian and Oromo. The tree is inspired by the Oromo flag. I wanted it to have a tie to me but not be so obvious that you’d know without an explanation. I’d like to get better so any suggestions would be great and appreciated. Thank you

I like simple streetwear designs that have good color palette, and cool but simple designs. Think early 2000s skate brands. My brand is inspired by my dna being that I’m an Ethiopian and Oromo. The tree is inspired by the Oromo flag. I wanted it to have a tie to me but not be so obvious that you’d know without an explanation. I’d like to get better so any suggestions would be great and appreciated. Thank you