Thoughts on my design?

After a long while of trying to hash out my family coat of arms, I think I’ve finally figured out the design I love. I might make the suns slightly lower to be a little more even with the bar, but other than that, I think the design is pretty sound and I believe it fits the rules of heraldry and tincture. Just wanted to show the final design to everyone and see if I get any notes. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, and any help with how I would describe the heraldry in an official description would also be appreciated. Thank you!

After a long while of trying to hash out my family coat of arms, I think I’ve finally figured out the design I love. I might make the suns slightly lower to be a little more even with the bar, but other than that, I think the design is pretty sound and I believe it fits the rules of heraldry and tincture. Just wanted to show the final design to everyone and see if I get any notes. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, and any help with how I would describe the heraldry in an official description would also be appreciated. Thank you!