please take a look at my essay!!

Hello everyone!! I have a decent draft of a college essay I’m trying to get out by the 1st. Honestly, I think it’s going in a pretty good direction but it still feels clunky. I’m pushing the word limit, but i still feel like I have more to say. it doesn’t really need to be an in depth review, I just want a second opinion

Leave a comment if you’re interested!!!